Dialogues

I had the kids write a situation just using dialogue. Here are my favorites (it's best if you could hear it in their voices so just imagine... :) ) Also blogger sucks with formatting, so just pretend it's all indented.

"Victor, please go get and basketball!" said my dad.
"OK dad, it's inside. I'll be right back." I replied. "I am back."
"Hurry up!" He yelled.
"Let's start the game then." We said.
"3 pointer." Dad said.
"Ahhhhh!" I yelled.
"FOul!" he replied. "Free shot."
"Don't need to brag about it, gosh!!" I yelled. (I can totally hear him saying this- he does most days anyway....)
"It's OK Man." Dad said.
"No its not your way better than me." I replied.
Come on man I believe in you." my dad said.
"Yeah, I won whoho."

Hi Miss Worts, how are you ? asked Miss Slime. I'm good, how are you? asked Miss Worst. I'm doing well, said Miss Slime. Do you want to go get somethign to eat, asked Miss Slime. Ya, let's go eat some slugs in teh kitchen, said Miss Worts. Oh no there is only one more slug! said Miss Slime. That's mine, yelled Miss Worts. No it's mine, yelled Miss Slime. No, no, let's split it in half said Miss Worst. OK said Miss Slime.

(soo...... clearly got the dialogue part but NOT the formatting part....)

"Hello!" said a rock.
"Whoa! I didn't know rocks could talk." said Jhett.
"Well I can, my name is rock. What is yours?" Rock said.
"My name is Jhett. Do all rocks talk." asked Jhett.
"Well, I've been talking since I cooled from lava." replied Rock.
"That's cool, although does it hurt when people step on you?" asked Jhett.
"Yes! It hurts realy bad and people don't even say there sorry." Rock screamed.
"Well, I could take you home adn put me on my shelf, I wouldn't step on you there." Jhett said.
"That sounds nice could you do that?"
"OK, let's go." said Jhett.

(some spelling/punctuation issues but all in all, a funny story, very unique)

"Come on, hurry Blade!" Hawk replied to Blade.
"I know, we need to get to the wall before airstrike gets here!"
"Bullets are whizzing over our heads," Blade replied back.
"If they don't kiss us first," Hawk said slyly.
"Five minutes til airstrike," the radio cackl.ed
"Great, only a quarter mile to go," Hawk replied sarcastically.
"If we run we can make it," Blade said hopefully.
"Shoot the enemy, soldiers!" Hawk yelled.
"Look, it's teh wall!" Blade yelled excitedly.
"Airtstrike coming in," the radio cackled.
"Hurry, dive!"
"Just in time before teh airstrike came." Blade said.
"Just another said in Afghan, huh," Hawk replied with relief.

(this kid definitely knows his adjectives- also, apparently Afghan is a place....)